This is how I make a character, right?

Name: Shadowpaw

Age: Seven moons

Gender: She-cat

Alliance: DewClan

Rank: Apprentice

Appearance: Thick, dark grey fur with a distinctive black spot over eye. Dark amber eyes, and a small, compact body.

Personality: Easily distracted, rather snappish sometimes, a bit sharp-tongued, likes making jokes but rarely says them, quiet towards new-comers, and doesn't actually usually remember important stuff, like cleaning her pelt or not wandering off. Finds it really hard to sit still, and is mostly only friendly towards cats she knows well.

History: Her mother died from an overdose of poppyseeds, and her father disappeared soon after that, and is likely dead. She hardly knew them, so she doesn't really think about it.

Rp Example: Shadowpaw crouched, fixing her eyes on the mouse. Just a few more paw-steps... And pounce! She missed by a few mouse-lengths, and her prey ran away. "Foxdung," she muttered.

(Seeing as I'm RPing the DewClan leader for the moment) Are you sure you want to be a kit? DewClan's about to make a very dangerous journey; many cats are promised to lose their lives... Perhaps being an apprentice would be better?

I changed it to apprentice!

APPROVED!

And I'm diggin' the Percy Jackson quote in your siggie.
Who do you want your mentor to be? - Allegiances of the Outcasts