warrior for tawny clan

Name Stormfang
Age 4 greenleafs
Clan Tawny Clan
Rank Warrior
Description A huge black tom he has bright yellow eyes he has one white paw (front right) his muzzle is a cream white color the tip of his tail is white has a white chest his fur is always smooth he has sharp claws he keeps them sharp by scraping them against trees
Personality he is a calm cat he loves to give young cats advice he is a favorite amonst the clan he sees all cats outside his clan enimies he is a great hunter he is a loyal cat he is very loyal to his clan and would never betray them
history He had an apprentice who died while out hunting she was killed by a badger to this day he never forgets her he thinks it's his fault he doesn't have any real inportant history he is doing well

Sorry this can't be approved. Your doing EXACTLY what Oakclaw did . You can't have Tiger either, its ashame you didn't read the rules... Tiger too much of a common name, Its So common its boring. Use your imagination. If you want to have it approved it should be like this:

Glacierclouds bio

or here is an example I JUST made up:

Name: Thistlefoot
Age: 3 summers
Gender: tom

Alliance: Tawnyclan

Rank: Senior warrior


Appearance: Dark tabby tom with a large build. He has dusty green eyes and two white paws, one front left on the oaw only abd a paw on the right back coming up to the hock (The Knee on the back legs of a four legged animal) his claws are large and he keeps them sharp, he also has a white bib and muzzle

Personality: His the brother of Nightail, He loves her but they rarily speak. He has a loner personality and prefers to stay at the back of a group. In a fight the circumstances differ, its rare that he loses and is a proud tom in the ranks. He's no good to talk to a pretty lady and tires easily in a run. He can complain but we have all seen worse?

History: Thistlefoot is a sure footed tom, he was clan born and makes friends easily. His apprentice was Strikefast and he enjoyed the job. Thistlefoot has no history of importance, up till now he's been healthy and well, he looks after his clan and is a favourte among the other cats and ladies (growl lol)

RP Example: Thistlefoot yawned. His dusty green eyes narrowed at the glazing sun, he flicked his tail irritably the flies were crawling on him. He stood and shook his pelt. "There is only one way to solve a fly problem," He mewed aloud. He padded over and lay in the stream, "Lets see them follow me in the water!" He smiled looking up. These days were good for a tom in their prime.

Thats the LEAST we expect you to do...

YES MA'AM *salutes*
i made it like that from watching him

Yep well I can't wait till you make a NEW one, and get rid of and relations to OC while RPing on my website.

there, mostly edited ,how about now?

hmmm.... speak to Longstorm and see what she says cos' I think I'm getting severe Déjà vu

oh, i forgot rp example

Hold on: this is a Guest...

its a guest now...

do you think were a bit... too ebil?

YES
*Making you guilty*

?????????????????????????????????????????????? How will that make them feel guilty??????????????????????????????????